Look into his Eyes

In class we have been writing about a boy from a picture and we had to describe what we could see was in his eyes. We also had three sentences that were basic and then we had to turn them into amazing sentences with lots of descriptive words. Here is my piece of writing.

Here are the basic sentences:

It is night time.

A boy walks on a road.

He sees a figure.

He feels happy.

Here are my sentences:

It’s a full moon night where the weather is stormy and the lightning is striking down on the trees starting forest fires where the trees fall down on each other and snapping in half.

Jacoby lumberes over to a little shelter that is dimly lit by a boiling hot fireplace that hasn’t been put out.

Jacoby hears a twig snap and slowly turns his head around like a turtle walking and spots a mysterious figure wearing black clothes so no one can see him.

He glances at the figure and still isn’t sure who it is so he starts shining a light at the figure and sees who it is, he starts to grin then he smiles, IT’S HIS LONG LOST DAD!