It's great to see the improvements you've made since your last animation: your speech bubbles are much easier to read because you are displaying them for longer, and your characters are moving in and out very smoothly. To make it look even more realistic, maybe you could have your characters coming forward from the background a little more, becoming bigger as they come closer; at the moment most of your characters come in from the side and leave to the side. Mrs Idle
Hi Deakyn it's Ben here from Awahono School. I like your slideshow because I like war stuff and because there was lots of detail and pictures that look cool. Next time you could put more people at the start.
Hi Deakyn, your SMA that you created is amazing and i can't wait to see the next one. I watched it over three times and didn't see any mistakes great work. Maybe next time you could add the mother of the boy telling him not to go to the arcade because that would give the story a little more detail and more of a beginning if you know what I mean? Kind Regards Blake
Thanks for the helpful comment Blake. When I read what I could've put in I felt like you could've helped me ad Miro create this SMA so it would actually make more sense. I can't wait to see the next one too because I have only done a couple hundred slides and would like to have interesting ideas to hook the reader/watcher. Please visit my blog some more I would love it if you did.
It's great to see the improvements you've made since your last animation: your speech bubbles are much easier to read because you are displaying them for longer, and your characters are moving in and out very smoothly. To make it look even more realistic, maybe you could have your characters coming forward from the background a little more, becoming bigger as they come closer; at the moment most of your characters come in from the side and leave to the side.
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Hi Deakyn it's Ben here from Awahono School. I like your slideshow because I like war stuff and because there was lots of detail and pictures that look cool. Next time you could put more people at the start.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the helpful comment Ben. The next one I have started so far has got more characters in it at the start.
DeleteHi Deakyn, your SMA that you created is amazing and i can't wait to see the next one. I watched it over three times and didn't see any mistakes great work. Maybe next time you could add the mother of the boy telling him not to go to the arcade because that would give the story a little more detail and more of a beginning if you know what I mean?
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Blake
Thanks for the helpful comment Blake. When I read what I could've put in I felt like you could've helped me ad Miro create this SMA so it would actually make more sense. I can't wait to see the next one too because I have only done a couple hundred slides and would like to have interesting ideas to hook the reader/watcher. Please visit my blog some more I would love it if you did.
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