Friday 9 March 2018

That Was Summer

In class we have been writing a poem about summer. We were inspired when we read a summer poem by Marci Ridlon. We had to start each verse with “Remember that time.”  We had to make a long question then another little question after, starting, “Remember how…? We ended each verse with “That Was Summer.” Here is my poem.


Remember that time
when the grass went all brown
Image result for sunand the hot hot sun caused a drought
or that time when you first leapt into the hot car
and drove to the beach
and you sprinted across the hot sand beach  
and you were boiling hot?
Remember how the bees were buzzing around you?
That was summer.

Remember that time
when you jumped into the warm water
Image result for dogs at beachwhen you went surfing
and when you went on trips with your family
and you heard dogs barking in the car
or when you collapsed to the ground?
Remember how you had fun with your friends?
That was summer.

Remember that time
when you ate your yummy lunch
or the time you were dashing through the long green grass
and you stopped running and wanted to go again
or the big white puffy clouds
or the waves crashing into rocks
and when you felt the cold breeze?
Remember how you spent family time at Christmas?
That was summer.

Remember that time
when the big storms hit
Image result for stormand that time it caused lots of damage to the cities and towns
when people’s roofs went flying off
and that time when the huge raindrops splattered down
or when the hail smashed down disintegrating into little pieces
or when the huge hail pieces smacked your window
or that time when you needed five blankets to keep you warm
and when your clothes got drenched outside on the clothesline?
Remember how you were going to play outside but you couldn’t?
That was summer.

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